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Tempest

Alone...Set adrift
On a sea of emotion
To traverse the void
Of this tempest tossed ocean

With little to guide me
No sense of direction
I am lost on the waves
Without shelter...protection

No stars dot the sky
No moon in the night
To steer me to safety
In its gentle light

Left to the mercies
Of tides ebb and flow
Battered by gales
My emptiness grows

Far on the horizon
I sense there, two harbors
One filled with sorrow
One, loves tender arbors

Where shall I port
When this tempest does cease
On shores etched by pain
Or on beaches of peace

Lovely Castaway courtesy

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Stormy Sea courtesy

Original Image : [link]


Poem : by Me

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:iconlobotomydoll:
Very cool! I love the lighting on her. :)

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"Be who you are & say what you mean because those who mind don't matter, & those who matter don't mind."
-Dr. Seuss
:iconmidnightstouch:
Thank you so much! I wanted her to stand out a little from the background so I was pleased with the effect. Thanks again! :)
:iconlobotomydoll:
You're very welcome! :D

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"Be who you are & say what you mean because those who mind don't matter, & those who matter don't mind."
-Dr. Seuss
:iconsylvereyedqueen:
wow! so romantic and soft lightening :wow:

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:evileyes: :evileyes: There is beauty everywhere, just look around again in otherwise :evileyes: :evileyes: نايورا
:iconserkenil:
Amazing...great work...the clouds look well made and the moon hidden behind them is amazing...generally, the picture is great...well done...:)

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:blackrose: Where Am I ? No, you will go to Japan :blackrose:
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:iconsupersquee84:
Wow, thats really good. Like the umbella that she sailing on. Great job!! LOVE the poem.

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:iconnakaya:
Very nice, picture and poem. Lovely.

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Data: "Throughout the ages, from Keats to Jorkemo, poets have composed odes to individuals who have had a profound effect upon their lives. In keeping with that tradition, I have written my next poem in honour of my cat."
:iconmidnightstouch:
Thank you! I'm so glad you like the piece. Thats a high compliment! :hug:
:iconmidnightstouch:
Thank you so much! :hug: I'm so glad you like the piece! :)

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